Nice one ali, kind of reminds me of the silver charioy, very fairy tale, but the imagry was magic.
love ya!

The imagery in this poem is amazing.
The way you structured it really does add something to it. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This is truly a work of art! and it kinda sounds familier. I must have read it before when the server logged me out. anyway, I can't find anything to criticize, so 5/5!

Very well written, i liked the repetition and the way you set it out.
The wording is beautiful, definately 5/5

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Hey alinator!
awww great job it almost give the reader a shivery feeling, great descriptions!!!
xoxo!~rach

Nicepoem, thanks for commenting on mine... yours is goodkeep going... thanks again cud u check out... if you knew! thank hun xxx

Wow! so beautiful! i can imagine myself being wrapped in curtains! thanks for commenting on one of my poems! ;D 5/5