:) :) :) :) :) : ) :) this is the best one yet that I have read LOVE IT

Great poem! keep up the terrific writing oh, and thanks for the comment on my poem. lol! it made me laugh. ;)

This poem has a great and strong sense of a rhythmic pulse. the rhymes add to this aswell, basicly a great poem. im not normally one for love poems, but yours rock. keep up the good (stuff).

rob

Good work on this poem. It has good imagery and a lot of emotion and thought put into it. Keep up the great work.

Hey i loved your poem! It was very well written and I liked your style! I really liked the lines:
"And the last tear fell
From your over-cried eyes,
I was still standing there,
Heart pounding too long
Waiting for the moment
You knew that you were wrong."

Nicely done! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

Comment by Tripp on a thread in the forum:

I loved this poem...the rhyme and rhythm were as close to perfect as you could get
in the english language...and it was steeped to the top with emotion too. Probably
one of my favorite poems on this website. Great Job