It starts off really well but kinda loses its thread mid way.

Lol oooo kristi getting a little violent, lol but no i liked the poem , but sad bear that someones a meanie butt, giveme his name and address and i'll have him dead by the end of the week!!!!!! hehehehehe

lots of love
☼*~*Becky*~*☼

Omg this poem is amazing!! good job