This is good too, my fav. thing about poems is the emotion behind them and you show yous wonderfully!!!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
~~Sweetie

The balance of the heart and mind does my soul good ...geat poem! 5>>>

Hey darl. such a t0uxhing p0em. heartfelt g0od j0b! keep it up

Wow i wrote a similar porm but dint put it up
loved this poem
5/5
love
amy

Your avery good writer.. and im going to add you to my favorites.

I love this poem, Its really good! Don't put yourself down about how good it is, Its easy to see it came from the heart!!! Good Job 5/5 Lucy xxx

Awesome [poem hun..
it's sad and i can definately relate xoxo

This was a great poem I can definitely relate to it. I was through the same thing. My guy "friend" acts like he doesn't know me. It breaks my heart but my mind is only set on him.

Nice poem good rhyming great work. read and comment on some of mine please

Its a pretty good poem, i think u need alittle more then it is right now

Great write!

AMAZING!

I think you poem is pretty good. For me the best time to write is when your emyions are all over the place

Aw i really like it..it reminds me of a poem called Heart we will forget him by Emily Dicinson

This poem isn't good? What are you talking about Amanda, this is a wonderful poem! I can definitely relate to this... excellent work hun, keep up the good work! <3 5/5

~Loveless Nights~

Beautifully written Amanda...and I hope you're doing well girly....I think of you often and wish you much happiness....hugs, Ann