This is so sad but REALLY good. I loved it!!! Keep up the good work.:-)
Stephanie

Wow...thats sad but I really like it. Lots of emotion and great use of words! Keep up the great work hun
Juls

Very sad, but well done maybe work on the style a bit to make it pop but wonderful!

Pure

Quite different. Quite different. The wording though nice for what it did could be a touch better to make this better yet it is good. Very unique since it was a very different poem. Excellent work.
~Faith

Omfg. that is so effing good. omfg. omfg. i love it. keep writing. ill check out ur other stuff also. 5/5.

This one was really good. i really liked it and it's very sad. But it shows how the cousin wasn't good enough wasn't being a good relative like we all should be to our familys. You did an amazing job. Very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

ps thanks for the comments

OK THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING gurl you brang tears to my eyes and i'm thinking in my head "dont cry dont cry" i just hope this poem isn't based on a true story...........it was sooo brilliant.
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*thumbs up*
luv jess xoxoxoxo