I reli lykd this poem.. i dont reli read these kinds, but this one got my attention.. i lykd ur flow and ur rhyme a lot.. and ur word content was powerful..
thnx 4 ur comment
Nouna

Hey, this is great
This is exactly what i was trying to convey with my poem, good job, i like it
I wanted to thank you for the pleasing comments you left on my poetry, i really appreciate it :)

This is a poem that we all need to read.
I found myself in its grip after the second line.
The way you acknowledged to destructive attitude of society as normalcy touched me so deep that I had no choice but to smile through the tears. To me this is a poem in which the poetry needs no praise , but only the acknowledgement of the message spoken .I found it healing just by the volumes it spoke to me. 5/5
JIM The Man within

This was a very interesting poem it had me from the moment i read the first two line, especially because its so true and someone should definately stand up for the weaker once
5/5x