Wow, this is poetry, as I was taught it was when I was a child, with such powerful imagry and discription. I found this poem to be very wonderful. You definately have a gift for using words. My only comment is that I would recomend that you write footnotes explaining who some of the people and places you used in your poem. Only because some people might not be familar with those refrences and I would hate for that to take away from their enjoyment of this excellent work of art. A wonderful job.

-Tainted Mikochan

Thanks for the advice Tainted Mikochan :)

Whoa! this has very long lines. but in a way these are what makes this a great poem.

the topic is great. original, a bit. but still very good word usage and the way it ended is very good. thank you for writting it. i am somehow more relaxed now. lol.

i voted and gave you a 5! good work.

David

Such a dark and magical poem. well done. this was very intriuging, i loved the way you set it out and it did not seem clogged with so many words per line.

5/5 David