Oy... that was a good one. i especially like your similie about the truth because that is so... well... true! i mean, often times the truth does hurt, but ya know, its for our own good that we know whats wrong. good job on this one! ^.^

I liike the repition. but...truthfully, it sorta doesnt make sense. but, im glad u had the experience....?

Great i loved this i feel the same please take alook at some of my poems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!