Hmm ive felt that same desperation..nicely put into words.
Thanks heaps for the comment..yeh i know wat u mean but sometimes it's so hard to try n change when u just keep failing...
hmm well take care xoxo

Very nice... there was a lot of personal emotion and i like the message behind it.

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Love it its so sweet:)
keep up the good work

Jacs
xxx

Sorry, i just don't understand
what you ment by your comment
on my poem
Jen

Hey dis poems excellent! i kinda know how you feel, not exactly been dere before but felt the need and helplessness. keep up the good work!:) 5/5!!

I like how you write a mini story in poem form. You go into such detail about everything. I really enjoyed this poem, keep it up.

Ive commented before on dis (mez) but i just wanna tell u agen did is a real good poem.. so keep it up!
xxx :)

Hey darl. g0od j0b 0n this 0ne. very t0uching n meaningful and heartfelt. g0od j0b! keep it up l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra