Wow thats really good, i love it, good job -xxx-

I agree with Steph! I really like this poem, I can totally connect with it! Good job, xoxox

This is really good... great job!!!

Wow great poem. i really liked it ! sorry if its a true story...im here if you need 2 talk...but ur poem was great

Intense, Deep and sooo... very powerful. I am so touched by the way you write. TY

Aw hun thats really sad.
I've been/going through the same thing with my friend now..well at least to what you've written about.
Take care of urslef..things will get better
Chin up babe
xoxoxox

Heyy.. omg.. im speechless, this is such a sad poem.. i luv da poem cuz i can relate to it.. n as alwayz 5/5!! hehe ^_^

Wow love 5/5. Sometimes I feel like this...great poem keep it up!

Wow I can feel the fear and feeling on lonliness in this poem. I love it. You did really good.

::MELI::

..*breathes in && out slowly*..i'm speechless again...sorry but your poetry just blows me away

no critique from me