I like it...it sounds like what alot of people i know would say...-xxx-

This is a great piece-very well written and conveys emotion so well, it is short and simple yet direct and edgy.It can probably be revised /re-written a bit to make it stronger.The ending is great-very powerful.

I rly dso liek this poem..it sasy soo mucch abotu this cruel world....

Lissa