Comments : Empathogen

  • 14 years ago

    by Lenny

    Love the structure its quite odd for you which makes me love it even more, the feeling and experience of reading and understanding your work and especially this piece is just divine. The message and basis of this piece is great because i can relate to it as im sure heaps of people can.

    Cant wait for more, sorry for the no critisism, your getting too damn good!

    Cheers,
    Lenny

  • 14 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    This is great. This is my favorite of yours. It hit home with me for a variety of personal reasons.

    This stanza:

    it's hard to know
    whether you're playing with fire
    or sifting through ash
    when your appendage
    of emotion
    has already been charred and
    scarred
    past the point of healing,
    and for that matter,
    barred from any sense
    of feeling
    at all.

    Brought it all home to me. Perfect.

  • 14 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Wow......again, amazing! you really are a great writer! jesx

  • 14 years ago

    by Vegetable

    I love how your voice is clearly expressed in your poems. brilliant. Its such an original topic- very refreshing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ariana

    I liked this, even though I have no idea what the title means! You've got a really original topic and unique ideas in here, makes for interesting reading on a different persepective. Nice write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by EoB

    Very good poem, the structure works perfectly , and the content sure makes me think. There is a strange flow to it, despite the lack of rhyme and the structure...

    good job man

  • 14 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Sad, and i wonder that too.....