Love the structure its quite odd for you which makes me love it even more, the feeling and experience of reading and understanding your work and especially this piece is just divine. The message and basis of this piece is great because i can relate to it as im sure heaps of people can.
Cant wait for more, sorry for the no critisism, your getting too damn good!
This is great. This is my favorite of yours. It hit home with me for a variety of personal reasons.
it's hard to know
whether you're playing with fire
or sifting through ash
when your appendage
has already been charred and
past the point of healing,
and for that matter,
barred from any sense