This poem is basically my life story. you should read some of mine we are sooo alike tht its funny. but dont worry whtever your problems are they will soon get better. i know it dont seem tht way but thinkin tht makes me live another day. its true so dont end ur life people will care about u and miss u a lot. i said over n over again tht they wouldnt miss me so i wanted to die so badly i even kept cutting my wrists deeper n deeper. well ttyl

AWESOME work hun...as always...deep...so deep...yet I can feel it...the rhyming is good...and the readers can really feel it...trust me...they can...

I can relate to this too, I loved the flow it wasn't rushed at all which alot of ppl have that prob.

In darkness my soul once lay
Anguish and pain filled each day
Slicing skin to relieve my pain
No one knew i was going insane

thats my fav part

5/5

Awww..sucha great read! and i can relate it greatly too! keep writing!!:)
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F u c k i n g amazing!!!!
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