Wow that was really deep. You are a great writer don't ever stop. And thanks for the comment. Sorry I thought you were a girl:( LOL Sorry again. Lots of love ***Ashley***

Your grammer needs some editing, but it all flows along nicely.

Your poems are so awesome!!!
i like this its all so true and sad.
keep it up! propz like always.

Take Care,
.:*BX Girl*:.

Sad but vrry well done.

LISSA

AMAZING!!!! this is a very powerful poem...i kno what its like to lose someone to one of those things and its not fun to lose them... i really liked the stanza with the questions...it really will get people thinking...
~Sandra~