This poem is so sad. =[ I hope you're okay...

Good job.

This reminds me so much of that movie Donnie Darko. If you havent seen it, i dont want to spoil the ending for you, but there's a part in the movie when he just lays down smiling knowing he'll die.
Beautiful as always my dear... you never cease to make me smile.
-A

This poem was amazingly done, i love how it flows off the tip of my tongue.
beautiful.

The opening of this poem just screams the promise of something poetic.
and i loved how you began with the notion of a dream, which brings to mind color and beauty, and then it ends with the note of somehing grey and colorless. it was a wonderful contrast