The loss..

by Jacob M Parnell   Nov 17, 2005


The loss of a loved one.
Can be so awful and cruel.
Your heart is like a loaded gun.
And you have already lost the duel.
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The pain is so great.
You don't know what to do.
Not wanting to wait.
This has been to much for you.
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But everyone tells you it will be ok.
But you want it now.
You want it to end today.
The only question is how?
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You loved them so much.
But there are more fish in the sea.
But you still desire there touch.
You long for them to set you free.
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Days seem like years.
And minutes seem like hours.
You try to hide the tears.
And people comfort you with flowers.
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But don't give in.
Destiny will make it right.
Your heart will finally win.
But Im still here for you tonight.

(c) Copyright JP

I wrote this for this girl I know, who her boyfriend just broke up with her, I hope it will help her out.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww that's so cute..the fact that u wrote that for her is really nice. I'm sure she'd greatly appreciate that.
    Take care of urself xoxo

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