Comments : 21

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I like this its short and too the point. and the rhymes arn't too predictable.

    hope everythings fine between you and whoever this is about

  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    Great poem!! i loved the ending the best!! wonderful poem 5/5 great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wicked Poem. Short but powerful!