You really write your emotions into this poem hun 5/5 xxxx

Great poem it made me sad.. great job!

I verily liked this poem, its imagery and its diction. If I were to recommend something though, that would be a better development to facilitate flow between the stanzas. Well done nonetheless!

Wow, what a great poem. you have an amazing talent and everything in your poems is so strong and moving, keep it up!~whittney