Comments : One Last Breath

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    Wow, that was really deep. kinda creepy but deep none the less. lol, the line
    "so many friends, so many guys
    so many times, so many goodbyes" was awsome, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow. t that was very heart felt and emotional. You wrote it quite well. Thanks for posting that. Hunny, you can do it, you can pull through, I have a strong belief in you.

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I liek the last 2 lines...so cute...EXCELLENT! xoxLISSAxox