That was really good. It had a lot of emotion in it. I can relate to this poem... I dont know if I relate to it. good job!

Wow thats so good and so true omg thats hella good i gave u a 5 that poem really is good

Wow, this is relatable for a lot of people, you can touch people deeply with this one.
I think you did an amazing job, transforming emotion in to words. The beauty is indeed not lossed.

Good poem. I often have that thouht " What if i would go" Leave and go somewhere else. And I realise, that I can't just go away, but just thinking of what I might be able to do, relaxes me sometimes. Nice poem. Excellent. And also thanks for your comment.

Wow I cant relate, thx for r/c on my poem

5/5

I can relate to this poem so much...you have such talent, i really liked this part
I take one last look,
look toward freedom,
down the long silent road,
over the empty wasteland,
as barren and empty as i feel,
I long to walk over it,
ti leave this place,
but I cannot,