Hey=)
i told u what i thought of this.. pure awesomeness!! lol great job xD im gonna check out the others now. much love

This poem is so sad. The only funny part is the end of it end. Its good and hope you write more.

5/5 so far! I think; if you want my advice, that is; you should mention something about 'the little boy who cried wolf' for use in comparison or use it for a base to branch out from. nice job so far, very good!

I like it:P
nice and different.
You're rhythming is really working..well done babe.
luv u xoxo

Pretty good... 5/5! :o)

Thanks for sharing. Don't give up... Alright?

((((Big Hugs))))

Michelle

I think it's good one of my favorites by you. Very nicely done... xx:

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