That was relly good i gave it a 5 thanks for voting on mine you should read more of mine thanks bye

This is very good. the emotions are so strong

I am not sure i get it all to well but i like the layout and the idea behind the poem. keep up the good work i hate to see eome one so sad tho

Nice job, your writing is very controlled and well thought out. I liked the title of this also, well done.

Good poem, very sad. Rhyme and flow is good and you have great punctuation. Hope you don't feel this way because life is the most precious thing any one has ever given you and you shouldn't give it back!!
~~Sweetie

Wow, thats crazy. Hopefully that's not how your life is..sorry if it is. -Kels [Good poem]

Wow, thats crazy. Hopefully that's not how your life is..sorry if it is. -Kels [Good poem]

I really like this one. alot of feelings, do you right from experince. keep up the good work

Crazy poem :) I like it