I love the style of this poem. It grabbed my attention from the first stanza.. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care xx: blaine

*> : PainOfOne

I really liked this poem. I especially loved this part:

I love you.
I love you, more.
I loved you first.
Yeah, but I loved you last.

Great job! Keep up the good work

"Love is what happens
when friendship
can not be controlled
because we get too friendly."
So true, nicely done