Wow thats was really deep. nice poem sorry you feel this way 5.5

Wow great poem.. great use of words too.. i loved the ending esp.. ur really good.. if u could pls check out ma poems and tell me wat u think thanks. much love.

Thanks for your comments i will look at yours and comment on them too. xxx

Very sad....
You used your words well, it read well and youput a lot of emotion in it. Well done !!
5/5

Thnaks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Great poem. very well rwritten

Alright...sorry...can't really understand this poem...to deep for a little girl...hehe...I'll go see the others

Oh my gosh, this poem just makes me want to cry it is soo good but what its about is so horrible, i am so soryr if this poem is true it is completely wrong and should not be happening, i would love to tlka to you if you need it, but keep up the good work your an amazing writer

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Aww how sa.d. i love it tho : ).. good job : )