Comments : Bedtime story

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    This topic is well explained

    one person not saying how they feel while the other carrys on blindly

    the last section brings it home

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Great job loved it 5/5 keep it up! I've never read a poem about that topic! it was awesome tho

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This was great.

    -Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by 07Ashli

    Awesome poem
    good work!

    --Ashli