Broken heart letter

by dearly   Nov 21, 2005


What's wrong with me?
is it because i'm not beautiful?
is it because i love you too much?
am i wrong if only you i see?
am i wrong if only your voice i heard?
why did you leave me after all this years?
is she love you more than i do?
is she the one you want to be your last?
than who am i to you?
these questions was the only thing in my mind since we broke up
my friends told me to forget you
they told me that there are things that rather left unsaid
they said i'm deserved better
but i didn't want someone else
all i want is you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    GooD expressionS....... excellenT feelingS... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DrowningDreams

    I rate this peom 5 because it is soo truly and deeply from your heart. i love it!! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer_chick

    I am really sorry that yall broke up.
    If yall are meant to be together, then it will work out and yall will get back together. I hope you just remember to smile, and never give up on anyone you truly love, because you need to do what your heart tells you to do.
    If you need to talk you can send me a e-mail. I will always be here for you, I give great advice.
    qtpiec22@yahoo.com
    ~casey~