WOW, That's really good. I wasn't expecting it to be so good at first, but as I read I was like... WOW!!!! That's amazing, you are an amazing writer! I love the flow and the rhyme scheme! Good job, keep up the great work!

~BJ~

That is a really good poem. I can tell that you really like this person.
Keep writing, because thats the only way to express how you truly feel.
I am always here for you if you need to talk.
qtpiec22@yahoo.com
e-mail me.
~casey~

Thanx everyone. even though our relationship didnt work out, these comments still mean alot to me. i still love him and i always will. once again, thanx