Very intresting. I like it, Except it sounds like you were trying to rhyme, but not quite there because there are sort of scattered rhymes, which takes away from the overall smoothness, this poem has potential, good work.

God, sonuds just like my miserable life, my two best friends Ana and Mia....Just can't get rid of them!!! Love this poem, cause it's something I can relate to. Hope that you can beat this in time....

Hugs Sabrina

Thanx so much

" in perfections"

^Should be "imperfections"

I like the personification in this poem, and how you 'talk' to Anorexia. Good job.. good descriptions. But I sincerely hope that it's not true!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy