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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Simply amazing.... this is a great poem, and the emotions you expressed were so deep... Keep up the great work!!

  • 18 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    I love your poem! its so beautiful and breath-taking.... i'll keep reading your work!!!
    xo adge

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Wow.... thats the only word i can think of... wow... ;D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good poem, Good rhyme and flow. Add pu nctuation but that's all.
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    I enjoyed your poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by libby

    You really captured a feeling here, it made me feel lonely just reading it. I love your irregular rhyme scheme, you pull it off without sounding awkward. My favorite part was this: "and I keep falling into every person I meet". I don't know why it appeals to me, but I like it a lot. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    You write so beutiffully is it any wonder you were the first to hit my list of favorites. Thank you for a great read.
    Your friend
    Tim

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    WOW! And all this while I thought I lived in two worlds! I really liked this poem.......some words are my sentiments exactly.......sigh...