Great job!!!! 5/5

Omg this poem is really good, it has alot of emotion in it, and brought back alot of memories, that i was starting to forget.....but ty, b/c im a ferm belive in "if you forget the past, it has to repeat itself, b/c you obvisouly didn't listen the first time around."

I was going to say iabsolutely love stanza two but man the whole poem is like a masterpiece... your going to be like poe .. edgar.. allan poe... i flippin love his writings he is so amazing and you are the next one if you keep it up.. now the poem.. wow :O my eyes were huge when i read this it really brought the word anorexia to life.. i have no experience with this word and reading this really helped me realize what it means. your poem is like living in a friend of an anorexic person.. all the pain and sorrow i love how you speak of messengers that is so true... well im excited to read part two.. so.. here i go..

You write really thought-provoking stuff, and that really is a true talent, keep it up, I hope the person you dedicated it to is ok!
luv Helen :-)

To quote a genious

"i hate poems like this...

THEY ARE SO DAMN GOOD ...."

Lol. This is an amazing poem - well, all of your poems are amazing. So in general, you're an amazing writer AND you seem to be abit of a hit with the ladies!!! chin up - amazing poem, keep writing.

amy xx

Wow, just wow.I read your profile. Are you realy 13?If you are then you are way beyond your years. keep 'em coming I really like your style of writting....

Wow matt... nice job!!

so meaningfull

keep up the good work!

-Inki

Boom shacka locka i got the 100th vote on this one and a deserved5/5 but you probaly already knew thats what it would be. nice work on this one and many others I've read.

I really liked ur poem coz i could relate to it!! but i thought it was in short! mint!

Great poem... im looking 4ward 2 part II. I was anorexic at one point... not a fun time... but any way, u did a gr8 job!! *favs*

GREAT POEM LOOKING FOWARD TO PART 2

Good work i like you did good