What a wonderful poem....fantastic work...keep it up

Wow that poem was amazing and you have described it in such a way that i can definately relate to it, i cant wait to read part two...keep up the great work, your a champ!
xox

Very Good!!

This is amazing, and ive never read a poem this good about the topic before. well done, brilliant stuff and i cant wait for part II. the language compliments the concept perfectly. i love it ^_^

Omg thats amazing

Omg thats amazing

Hey i thought it ws really good,you should do a second part for sure,id read it...mwa, i giv ya a 5...

I have never had anorexia, but somehow i completely understand, you're very talented and i hope part 2 will be out soon......5/5!!!

Wow i never knew so many people like poems about people puking to make themselves look better...just joking...or am i?

Wo0ow!!!! u rite vury gud and frm this poem i can already see that u probly relate tu people very easily!!... ur an awsum riter and ur words are pure.... kep ritin!

Wow, that was really nice.

Wow. I thought it would be coming from an anorexics perspective. I'd love for there to be more. Part II please!

Lv A, x

Wow. very powerful, i hope people suffering from anorexia will read this and get help. I'm sorry for your loss *hugs* i would like to see a part two, seeing how this one is so good. take care XXXXX
JL

I love this poem. Its so emotional and it flows smoothly! 5/5 from me!

That is amazing. Really I love it. You have tremendous talent, your writing is so dark and honest. Shows the truthness behind the feelings of anorexia.

well done

ness xxx

THIS IS SOOOO GREAT I LOVE THE CHOICE OF WORDS!!TRULY BRILLIENT!!!!!!!!

Are you sure you're 12? All I can say is never stop writing as irregardless of your age, your poems are excellent.

Through experience, your poems will only get better (if that's possible):>)

Holy crap man! you are so good!! that is soooo amazing ilove it!
sammy

That was a very beautiful poem.

I loved it.

Love Alixia

Very good...kinda makes me think of people who are or have been anorexic.... anyway, good job.