This is really good, i read part one and then part two....fantastic job, really really well written

Wow that was so well done
excellent piece of work
take care x0x0

Great Poem. Keep up the good poems x

Great Poem. Keep up the good poems x

Great ending to the first part.

"You belonged to him now,
Tortured, bound, and taut,
Starvation was remembered,
The former life forgot."

I especially love this verse. It's harsh and real.

ness xxx

Good job "12" year old boy "Matthew French", I'm sure your "girlfriend" Kyleigh loved this piece. I'm just not sure when it was possible for someone to be so bored and make up two accounts where one published the poems and one had to be a pretend internet girlfriend and compliment the first account. I find your talent a waste if you prefer to pretend to be something you are not. I can't believe how many people actually bought your profile, oh my god, what gullible dummies. Well, I'm not writing this is anyway related to me being jealous because I'm not at all. You're a good poet, I've given this a 5 for content but negative 5 for pretention..bottomline, a 1...and all your other poems recieve a 1 too..Well, I realized that giving 1 rating to fakers is my new found hobby. Take care always, Matt. Don't take this too seriously, be yourself.

Hey, feel free to rate me down too. I really don't give a damn about this account. Well, you suck. Another 1/5 and another 1/5...To all those who read this, I hope you start to gather up your hatred towards because you are all wannabes. Please rate me down as much as you'd like and I'll appreciate it but I won't return the favor back because you aren't just worth it.

Heyy awesome poem!! i loved it!! great job!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

Your poem is awesome... i know a few people that were suffering from anorexia..and people where going around saying i was anirexant to... but anyways its a great poem expresses so much in so little.

Dis iz such a gr8 poem, it made my eyes fill wiv tears,so glad u did part 2.........keep it up

Wowwwww....i have no idea whatsoever to say. to tell you how amazing your poems are. i thought i had talent for awhile, but dang, look at you. i quit writing poems and i don't really know why but i still read them. and you're one of THE best. goooood job.

I loved part 1 and 2, They are both so great. Your very talented.

*Blood Shot Eyes*

Well finally its here well its great and ur awesome so keep it up

I love the way you write it is very...
Mature for your age group.
I am not trying to sound mean but most peope your age are...
At a loss for words.

Love Alixia

I know that you were locked up,
Not what you're meant to be,
But now the lock is broken,
Acceptance was the key.
an absolute amazing ending for this piece. such a dark and "cold" poem. it fits in right with the first one. you are an amazing writer.. im adding you to my favorites so i can come back and read some more.. keep it up, matt
:] sarah

So sad, so deep, and sooooo well written and expressed! 5/5, and couldn't be anything less!
luv Helen
xxx

Nice workq

Nice work on this one.

OMG!!! I love both part I &II Kepp up the good work huney!! gosh i can't believe your only what 12-13? I'm almost 16 and can't write nearly as good as you!! Keep up the good work and your girlfriend is very luck to have such a sweetheart like you! Wish I was lucky enough to have a guy like you!

Love always, Britt

Good work