Heartache

by ash   Nov 23, 2005


I showed you all my affection,
and gave you all of my attention,
you showed me that you care,
and now the lies are more than I can bear.

Thousands of tears have been cried,
accusations from friends went denied,
you held my hand and it felt so right,
but I now know you lied that night.

My mind and heart raced,
the reality was hard to face,
it's to hard to face you now knowing you lied,
and my love for you was cruelly denied.

So my dear,please listen to me,
I now my love is easy to see,
tell me the truth about how you feel,
and tell me that your love is real.

Hey!Please comment on my poems and tell me where to make improvements!I really like constructive criticism, and would greatly appreciate it!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Ahslei... is this really you? thats so good. does zach lik epeoms? cuz he should no wat thay says. thats so good. no lie! the words flow good, and i no its from your heart and it cant be said better. awesome for sure... 5/5. and thanx for mentioning me in ur pro! loves yas with all my heart! ~sarah lynn