Because we cant read them, its hard to read your poems edit them and i'll be willing to read them

Okay poem, felt some feeling coming through the words. not sure what needs editing.. :S spelling..??
Keep up the writing!
Laterz,
Shirlz.

This is an excellent poem keep up the great work.

Good poem but no guy is worth hurting your self over like that.... you seem like a great girl and im sure that there are MANY more wonderful guys that would be honored to have you by there side..
lOVE ALWAYS Tiffany Heather