Well done. Good poem. Too bad she commited suicide. But that\'s what life is like sometimes. I had rather see her grow strong and be like \"screw him\" Hehe. But oh wel, well done. Erm maybe \"But know in her grave she lays\" Should be \"But now in her..\" I don\'t know? Just a very small typo maybe. Excellent.

This is so sad.. u got talent..nd i really loved this poem..

Woah.. this is so good!! i loved the details.. its really "gripped" me.. awesome job.. k keep writting!!

I love it! You have a great style. I enjoy your writing.

Now this poem is sad..but awesome. Is there a story behind this because I would like to hear it. You are a great poem write..keep up the great work. Thanks for commenting all mine. Much appreciated..-Kels

Hey...yh there is a story...but it aint mine. Its a mates. she didnt die but i knew he had killed her from the heart...she loved him and he betrayed her..email me if you want to chat!
btw...thanx for your comments people.. i really appreciate them!!
xxx

Wow hun i love this poem it has such sadness to it but yet is amzing and tell a story, not only that this poem shows how truly amzing you are at what you do keep it up

It's good...I just can't describe it...it's one of the best...and I love it so very much...you are a great writer...I hope you won't stop writing...

I wish i can give you more than a 5/5...i want to give you a 100/100...because i feel like this right this moment and i love the way that u put into words this poem...5/5...keep it up...ur in my favorites list

Awwwwww.....This is so sad.
It's EXCELLENT....KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK,,,,5/5

I like this poem its kind of like my life
Keep up the good work Matey

Another great poem

Another great poem

Wow that was reli effective!!! I like how u wrote it and the arrangement of the words was reli sweet and nice~!
keep it up
Much Luv
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ITS GOOD!!...BUT WAT ARE THE MORALS OF IT?