Great poem, hun! I'm sorry that he hurts you, but it will all work out in the end I promise you. You're a great writer, and I really enjoyed reading this poem!

Its a good poem and sometimes love hurts but i am sure both of you would work it out

U kno i never thought tiny would be rite.... but here i am 3 years later. and its woked out. im over him but were still good friends in each others lives.

thanks very much guys