Comments : I thought you be there!

  • 18 years ago

    by Beckey

    Really good poem! thanks for commenting and voting on mine ... i did the same for you 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachielle

    I love this poem you are very telented!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachielle

    I love this poem you are very telented!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    AAAMAAZING!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very touching poem. I liked how you said so much in the poem and you went through the entire friendship background. I think you have a few spelling mistakes though, in the 2nd, 4th and 5th stanzas. I know you didn't ask for critical comments but I thought I'd point that out. Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    That poem was so great...keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great job. i hope everythings working out for you. stay strong and live life as well as you can.
    ~babygirl88~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Awww dis is sucha sad poem! but its really good too..keeep it up m8!
    xxx :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, though it seems that every line is connected to the next line, as in a sentence. ........that sounds confusing right? lol Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a good poem, it was sad, and full of emotion. There's only one problem, there's a few spelling mistakes. Fix it up, and this poem will kick butt and take names.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h that a beautiful friendship p0em. very well written!! such a beautiful piece. very t0uching n heartfelt great j0b!! i realli liked it! keep up the gr8 w0rk!! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

  • This is exactly how i feel about one of my friends so again i can really relate and it totally touched me! good job tis extremely well written! take care xxx