Awww hunn
i know how it feels but im hopeing this poem aint trure

Hey, yeh im hopeing this poem aint true as well...
talk to mi
Love ya xx

Hey, that was so sad. we shouldn't let
this happen. great poem as usual.
I liked how you wrote the last stanza Mark.
take care,
marjan

The first step to fixing your mistakes is admitting that they exist, which you have b/c now you can be conscience of it, and do something about it, make a change. Your poem expresses a lot, good job with it.

-Mikochan

Yeah I hope it's not true too:( If it is let me know and we can talk :) I like this poem......keep up the good work:)

Love you lots:) AshleyHall

5/5 most definitly! and i totally know where your comming from with this poem..

OMGosh i love this poem.. its soo good 5/5