Awsome poem.no i havent ever imagined having a conversation with my corpse before. it sounds kinda intresting to think about though.5/5

Life is a gift, death is a curse. trust me hold on to life. great poem, original concept
love sammi x

Really good poem! absolutly! I read that you missed my comments, although I think you have the wrong natasha, I didn't write a book.
Anyhow thanks for your comments.. really apreaciate it!
I wish I could give you more then a 5/5 but I guess a 5/5 will have to do.

take care,
*TasH*

Cool...no...never imagine I'll talk to my own corpse...lol...that will freak me out...even if it's me myself...lol...interesting poem...one in a zillion...cute...

Hey, that was great and intersting.
I really liked its style.
and I think these lines were great:
then came one day when i asked him
what is making him smile after that unconvincing pain
heard voice from his tormented soul
i feel so free, six feet under i am living again

keep up the great work.
much love,
marjan

I love this poem Nitin it's nothing short of amazing!! totally 5/5..
chin up and keep writing xoxo

Great poem. nice rhythem and rhyming style!! well done
thanks for your comment

Ruby

Wow, very creative! Fantastic idea and fantastic poem! Very good indeed!

Great poem as usual nitin!
i had never thought to write abt this but u did it well.
good job! 5/5
keep smiling:o)
bharti

Life is a curse and Death is a gift. We would never learn to treasure life without death and life wouldn't be so satisfying without it. Death offers peace and serenity to those who've lived morally, but I'm not so sure for those who live cruel...anyways...We shouldn't try to give back what we were given so haha so death can wait a little longer.

Wow... only a soul who has nothing left to lose can write something like this. But then, just when you think there cant possibly be anything else to live and die for, life throws you another reason to smile and cry at once, right? Aint this game amazing?

Great piece of art, what else can I say? After commenting so many today, my mind can not come up with anything else to say.

Love
Michelle

What a very diffrent poem. This one is really scary. The things that went through your mind.

for the first time today i saw that weird piece of flesh grin
for the first time I asked myself, if this life a gift or sin

The imagery of these lines gave me chills.
I like your sweet love poems so much more.
Love you dost Cindy