As i recall your name.....

by unstated affinity   Nov 27, 2005


I know this is very long but pls read it.. it is very sad though....i was inspired by a movie that i watched last time

A beautifull place in Osaka
Was surrounded by sorrow
either bless or curse
this bind two young lovers

the sun was setting off
the day grew darker
the school principal has juz passed away
weep and cry , as a memoirs of her

in front of the funeral
a girl stood still
letting out a speech
for her beloved principal

bringing up a few words
the sky started to drizzle
struggling towards her feeling
full of care , love , and innocence

a student stole a glance
looked deeply into the affectionate girl
love at the first sight
was how the heaven designed

time were lapsing
since that damning day
love grew stronger and stronger
within the men's heart

but he always simply walk away
everytime they would met
the girl was clever and popular
in fact he was nothing, juz an ordinary people

one day the girl was going home
he was sitting alone
his eyes stuck on her
without realising that he was eating

she looked and laugh
becos of his mouth full of noodle bread
she came towards him
what is ur name..?

saku, replied the guy
isn't it beautifull..?
my name is aki
sakuaki, the flower season, she smiled gently

that was how thy get to know each other
bond by their name
through a recorder, they agreed to share their thoughts and feeling
every breath and life.. each and every day

sakura season were coming
thought of a surprise , he asked her for a stroll
knowing it was her birthday
he gave a wonderful present

she was very happy
but her eyes grew misty..
without another word
she fell relentlesly

panic and desperate he brought her to hospital
as she awake she said she was okay
no need to worry, i will be ok, saku
again smile drawn on her face..

on one sunny day
she ask him to come over
on the stage, he plae song for him with an old school piano
closing eyes he listen...

the melodies of sadness
breaking down the silent noon
as she finished, she walk and embrace him
with wattery eyes, she said i got cancer

he was stranded, his heart turn into pieces.
she was his life and his everything..
will love die too when someone die..?
she sofly ask, i love you..

he couldn't take it anymore
he thought they would be togerther for 100, 1000 years
juz wanna be wif her, sharing unforgotalble moment
all their colourfull life drawn back on his mind

that was the last day they met...
the girl was on intensive treatment later on
she said she will fight on with her life
she juz wanna be with him, forever and ever

the recorder, was how they communicate each other
during this tought time
it was full of sad and happy moment
pure love and faith..

until he got the last cassette from aki
he felt he was at the end of the world, because he realise how much he love her..
more than everything
even more than of his live

as he listen to the cassette
his tears rolling down on his cheek
drawn her face and loneliness,
her struggle to life

27 November 1985, it was raining outside
i couldn't bring myself to sleep
a'm afraid of tomorrow
that i won't be here anymore

all these days i've been dreaming of your face saku
as i recall ur name
i saw your mouth full of noodle bread
and u swallowed it earnestly

i dunno how many times
i keep chanting your name
wishing you to be here
right beside my arm

you know it was wonderfull and lovely
every single hour and day with you
and when you giv me a present on that sakura season
i was very contended, in fact you are the biggest present in my life

i love you so much
since the time we met,
you erase my pain and sadness
nothing more in my head
just a happy family

now tears welling up in my eyes
i dunno why
not because of this pain
mybe because i love you so much

if i happen to sleep tonight
please do not be upset
i juz can make it this far
please live your life and go on...

thanks for your time and your love
they were precious
just like you..............................
a miracle of my life

this love poems was base on a love story i watched.. i was simply broke in tears , so i decided to put it on poem.. please rate and comment, thx..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I bet your poem was better that the movie itself. it was really touching.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey yuniardi, that was really wonderfully written. you're a great
    writer. I enjoyed reading it very much
    and yeah, it was very sad.
    take care,
    marjan

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