Letting you go

by cynthia   Nov 27, 2005


Letting you go was the hardest thing i have ever done
letting you go has broken my heart
letting you go has left me dying inside
letting you go was something i never thought of doing in my life
letting you go caused me to hate myself
letting you go is something that has hurt me so much i think I'm going to die
but maybe is for the best maybe letting you go was a lesson sent by God so i can learn more about loosing somebody who does not feel the same way
but letting you go was so hard for me to overcome
and i cant believe i let you go

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I see in most of your poems you use a repetitive line...pull yourself away from that. I know there is certain rhyme scheme I use and I've found it hard to pull myself away from that though I am trying...however my ideas are different...But I know when you're used to a certain thing it's HARD to change...Hard NOT Impossible.

    If you make your poems like...
    I feel...
    I feel...
    I feel...
    I miss...
    I miss...
    I miss...
    you will eventually bore the reader. Though your ideas are good you could portray them differently...MY PERSONAL OPINION...simply a suggestion....Take Care ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Relly nice! I give u props for letting him go if he didn't love u cuz i did da same and i know it aint easy but is ok... keep it up take care ciao...

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