Hey babe u should no this but i luv u sooooo much...im sorry u feel this way but no u can always trust me....dont be sorry 4 hoo u r coz in my eyes i luv u just the way u are and i feel sooo sory 4 ppl who cant c that and i feel sooo luckly 2 hav u!babe u shouldnt feel as if sum ppl hav mor pain(i no its true)but pain is pain it doesnt matter how much u go thro its that u hav pain....n u should feel luckly that u hav less...i luv u babe n i will neva 4get yeasturday as we go married...i luv n i could say it 2 u every second of the day....keep shining n just rember im always here 4 u!luv ur wife..........

You did a very good job of letting your emotions out. It was a very power piece. The flow was good for the most part but the rhyming was sometimes forced. I liked it, and I think you have a great amount of potential. I'm also sorry if any of this is true, no one should have to suffer this way. One more thing, I do NOT think you are worthless in any way. And I hope someday you will realize this for yourself. Please Take care and keep writing. Thank you so much for your comment, it was greatly appreciated.

~rolo

P.S. Email me anytime you'd like.

Hun...this poem is beautiful, and so tragic. I am so sorry that you are going through such hard times right now... if you ever need anything feel free to talk to me. Great poem!

Hey, this is such a sad poem. it is so beautifully written, and all of ur emotions shine through. just perfect.5/5. lots of luv
xxemxxx

Aww huni..:'( that was truly sad becoz i dont want you to go through this.
hun im not sure what to say right now so i'll email you soon.. just don't give up because things will get better..ppl do care, you're just blinded to all of that rihgt now.
much love xoxo