Comments : Imagine This

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Great poem girl. Thanks for the comments. I know how this feels. Memories can be the worst torture..... what used to be and never again will. Lots of love,

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Hey!
    thanx for you comment and for your tip! i fully get where your coming from!
    and i just want you to know im not affended! So please dont worry!
    i LOVED that poem! Especially the lines

    "imagine the torture my heart goes through. Every time i think of you!"

    And

    "imagine the damage you've done to my heart! Stabbing my soul with your poisoned dart!"

    I loved both those lines! because their soo true! And i can fully relate! Iv bin in the same sit' before!
    Great poem! 5/5
    Love Paige!
    XoXoXoXoXo