Well now, see there, that writers block didn't last very long, lol. Breathtaking..... very romantic and passionate.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Really amazing poem 5/5 Great job and thanks for sharing.

This is a very beautifully written poem and so powerfully filled with emotion I really did enjoy reading it.

Wiked poem probebly the best ive seen out off all the love poems

This is a gr8 poem... i reely liked it. It is full of emotion. Please help me on mine and comment on them. thanx

Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem!!!!keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5

I really like it. I think that it's very romantic and passionate and the imagery just gives this sort of warm imagery. I think with time and practice in writing the language and metaphor and such will develop and become more complex, but it's great.

Carrie

That was really good.
make me feel lonely lol.
but yeah its full of passion.
keep up the good work.

Damn! lucky girl!!!! but i would never wear a short skirt, i think my thighs are too fat!!!! lolz, what am i saying??????? haha beautiful, sensual, and aesthetic! as always... 5/5 ;d yummy!

Pretty poem =-)

Very good

Very breathe taking turner
it really brings it to life good job

Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

So very touching and beautiful