Jonny this is excellent for your first poem. killer last line. i am v proud lol. well done n keep up the good work ^_^

Wow, what a brilliant poem, such emotion. i loved it

Well done my jonnykins!!!!! shes a moo neways. we all love u!!!!!! tis brill poem x x x

Very sad that happened to you its happening to me now i got a couple of poems like this you should check them out i gave you 5/5

Very good