Really pretty gurla. Is really unique ive never read anyone saying dat i love u with half my heart... and even though dat's how you feel is totally original!!! i love it 4 real! But my fave part was this:
"So next time you read my poems
And disagree with me
All I can say is I love you, I love him
But none of you love me"
Im sorry ma dat even dat you love both they don't even have a lil part of their heart to love you back... then again maybe they 2 ain't rite 4 you cuz when dat TRUE ONE comes in ur life u love dat person with ALL UR HEART (no halfs).. so...don't worry Algun dia ma! But keep on writing i love your work u ARE really talented 5/5 always ciao....

I love u mamiiiiiiiiiii...u have one person that loves u at least..no te preocupes....well another great poem that makes me want to cry..lolz...oh and i saw ur picz....u r soo gorgeous...i love ur daughter..she is such a lil treasure..u should be really proud...and u baby daddy ...he fine too...i guess u two have worked things out right mami?? i mean u can't believe that he let go of all that stuff because i mean "once a gangster...always a gangster"....such a good phrase...lolz... i let go of marco...even thou i noticed that he was changing...i can't believe everythin that i c..he has to prove it to me somehow...but now ima stick to miguel....and i wrote anotha poem...take care mami
i love u
Love always
PrEciOsa

*gasps* Amazing poem!! I love this, and I can relate to it so much. I know what it's like to find someone knew and love them to death, but then at the same time you still love the first one. Great job!