Hmm Excellent work. You are a very talented writer. I love your poems. I can get lost within it. Very good work. Keep it up ;) Lotsaa love, take care Josh, and keep writin please, I would love to read more :)

I like this a lot, Josh. You are a very good writer and this is an awesome poem.

Hey, the rhyming was very good josh.
I liked this poem.especially the 4 first lines were very good.
take care,
marjan