Comments : Better Off Alone

  • 18 years ago

    by kaitlynn

    Ur poem really made me feel good to kno that some 1 feels the same as me!

    ~Kaitlynn Brown

  • 18 years ago

    by MJ.

    I can relate to that poem so well..very well written..5/5
    keep it up take care
    Mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie

    :nod:

  • 18 years ago

    by blindedxxbyxxlove

    Wow...I really dont know what to say. This poem was awesome. Your such a great writer!!! Keep it up. Thanks for reading mine too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie

    I feel like crying after that poem, because I know that you and I are alike. I wish I could right that well...

  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Hey buddy, it's been awhile, i don't have a screename anymore but hope your doing good, i am and everythings going good. miss you buddy and always keep writing, i'll check up on you sometime. Good Luck and have fun. Always your freind *Anna*

  • 18 years ago

    by Caity

    This poem is a bittersweet poem n like all your other poems i loved it!!!! but sorry to burst ur bubble im here and ur not alone and the girl ur talking about must be pretty stupid to pass up a sweet guy like u!

  • Very well done, once again. great flow, emotion and depth to this one. effective use of repitition. powerful piece. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hades

    Thank You All For Your Support and For Commenting. I Truly Appreciate It and Hope That You Will Continue

  • 18 years ago

    by BiLLy

    This is real good and its true!
    but what happends when the girl of you life
    comes running back to you?

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Wow, really great work!!! loved it!!!!

    great how every other stanza ends in the same line!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessy

    I love this poem. . I just got over a heart breaking break up and i can totally relate. . I TOTALLY love it!!
    Keep the good work up

  • 17 years ago

    by blondeATheart007

    Ahh! this one i smiled because it was so good...and felt bad because it was sad
    haha..mixed feelings

    ps.[comment mine?]
    :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Scott C

    This was a truly amazing poem and it made me think of what i've been going through lately!

    Keep writing YOU'RE AMAZING!!

    Always,
    Kristy

  • 16 years ago

    by XxPainfulDeathxX

    Ah great poem i liked fall of god even better 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this poem was amazing. so creative, so hearfelt, yet sad. i loved it. so many different emotions were expressed throughout the whole thing.

    Your face would keep me up at night
    But now that isn't true
    I watched the darkness fade away,
    My skies at last are blue.

    i would have to say that was my favorite stanza. very deep, and pure. i loved it all. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.