by Nicole Nov 29, 2005
category :
Special events /
thanksgiving
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I'm thankful for the friends that I have. |
by PygmyPuff
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Its pretty weak. I would use some literary techniques such as a metaphor to "show" the love, not just tell the readers about it. |
by krysten
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Its really a good poem and you really put alot into it i mean in feeling thank you and i know we had bad times but i know it will get better |