Wow..this made me cry...its soooo good...and i love it every time i read it...well about him and his gurl...they broke up and she was like...its because of her isn't it???(her=me)...and he said yeah...so yeah they broke up like last week and we got together...our story started something like urs did...only he made the 1st step....he is in ESOL...cuz he just came 4rm mexico and all that...like 2 yrs and he kept on comin to georgia and goin back to mexico but since he seen me...well lets just say that he ain't never goin back...his cuzin is heCtor...one of my homeboyz and in the summer two years ago he 1st saw me at WAL-MART...thats when he fell 4 me...at that time i was only in 8th grade and so he went to mexico until the begining of this school yr...cuz he wanted 2 go to the same school...my 1st period is right next to his and i always wondered y he always looks at me...and y he always looks away when i look at him...but then he saw that i wasn't goin to talk to him so he made the 1st move...well not techinically a move...after class he would be like "psssst psssst mamita mamita"...i was like "yo who this guy and what does he want"...he never talked to me until a month later after he got my phone # and all that...he called and he didn't know that i spoke spanish...so he talkin that english that not even i understood...but i didn't tell him that i speak spanish until a week later...i just let him struggle...lolz..and then we began to hang out...went out 4 like 2 months...then broke up...then he started goin out with his ex...solangel...and yeah...now we are here....
some story huh...
this is what this poem reminded me of...
love it
love u too
lolz
love always
PreCiOsa

Ahhh! this poem deserves more than an average of 4.6.....you make the best poems! haha, i've added u to my fav poets list, so feel loved girl!!!!!!!!! ;D 5/5

Such a sweet and beautiful poem... I'm really happy for you!! You are very talented, so definitely keep on writing.